Rough Draft 10/22/10

Zachary Dienstbier

Language Arts

Rough Draft

10/22/10

Alex did not have a good life as a child. His father had been a drunk and he had been beaten many times. His mother had a smoking problem and had died when Alex was 11. Since then his dad had been in 18 different relationships all of which were while he was drunk. It was after one bad beating when Alex had decided to go away. His father had been playing poker with some of  his "friends" when Alex had asked if he could go to the movies. His Dad had turned around and with his beer bottle which was broken slapped Alex across the face. The sober men in the room had rushed Alex to the hospital and he had received 24 stitches including a couple of fake teeth.

Alex ran away the next day with all the money he could steal from his dad. He had lived on the streets, performing for money and eventually began to take mixed martial arts for safety. He was broke one day when a man walked up to him asking if he needed help. Alex had round-housed kicked him and the man responded by blocking the next one but still managed to get beaten. The man had pulled out his C.I.A. badge after that and asked if Alex had a home and if he wanted to come to the C.I.A. Alex politely accepted and they put him through some camps making him stronger and better at everything.  They were planning on sending him on a mission but some trouble came up. Alex had no actual schooling.

  Alex attended a school for about 6 weeks, in that time they figured out all they needed to know. Alex was smart in math and history. He excelled in those 2 but the others L.A. and Science were not that good. Alex had enough time to develop a social life and get a girlfriend, her name was Camryn. Alex only ever went to the camp if he could talk to Camryn some how and if not he refused. There was only one problem with Alex mentally really, and that was killing. Alex did not have the guts to kill or at least the shrink for the C.I.A. didn’t think so. He got freaked out when his mom died and he felt the pain and no matter what he would do almost anything to avoid it. There was only one situation, which he would do it, to save his life and then he made it quick and painless.

Alex was on a plane to Russia worried about his first mission. He was worried that he would never be able to see Camryn again. All he had to do was get into a compound disguised as a corrupt politician and find out what was going on. In that time he was going to have to avoid General Swayrts because it was known for him to randomly kill people if they looked suspicious. That was all Alex had to do but Alex didn’t have a good feeling about it.

Alex was dropped about 5 miles away from the compound and with enough money to rent a very nice car. Alex of course was old enough to have a drivers license but he hired a chauffeur to make it look like he was more legit. Alex had been given some steroids, only a little to make it look like he was tougher. As he stepped out of his Aston Martin the guard asked for an I.D., Alex pulled out a fake one and the guards nodded and let him in. Alex could have knocked them out but that wasn’t the objective. Alex knew he had dinner at 18:00 with some minor people but he knew that was where he would have to start.

At dinner he discovered that not all of the people were corrupted just mainly the ones with power or that’s how they acted. Around 3:00 Alex snuck out of his room and into the computer room were he had been forbid. He entered silently and peeked around the corner of the wall. There were men inside, and on the screen was the picture of the current Russian "president" Dmitry Medvedev and a second screen had a chat room going and Alex looked closely and saw the 2 names chatting. "RSSIAN MN" and "DMTRI H8TER" this made Alex assume that they were planning to hurt the president. Alex rushed out and forgot to close the door quietly and the men turned around and quickly looked at the security cameras. It confirmed he was a spy.